Product Description Copywriter | Nokia
Writing Powerful Product Descriptions
Three tips to make your product copywriting more appealing.
1.Understand Features vs Benefits
Product features are things like size, shape, colour and the characteristics of a product. Look at any Amazon page and you’ll see a long list of product features. Features tell your customer what your product has, but it’s limited in its ability to help a customer understand what it can do for them – this is why emphasising benefits over features is so important in product copywriting.
For example, with our headphones, a feature might be the 25 hours of talk or listening time on a single charge. The benefit? Enough power to last your entire workday, and on the commute home, with power to spare. The feature tells you what it is, the benefit tells you how it provides value.
2.Use Storytelling in Your Product Descriptions
Powerful product copywriting connects with users, it causes immediate head-nodding and it’s memorable and relatable. One of the ways you can do this is through storytelling. Your story doesn't have to be complicated (often you won’t have space for long, drawn-out storytelling on a product page). Instead, pull the reader into a common situation and use it to emphasise the feature, the benefit, and how it fits within the lifestyle of the user.
Example:
The pain point: When taking calls on the go, background noise makes it difficult for the person on the other end to hear your voice clearly.
Product feature: Enhanced voice pick up
The benefit: Be heard more clearly
Copy:
“Whether you’re in a noisy coffee shop or working from home, take important calls on the go. Enhanced voice pickup improves voice clarity so you can hear and be heard as if you’re talking face-to-face.”
Storytelling in product copywriting helps the reader understand how your product fits into their lives, why they should care about the product and how it will provide value.
3.Focus on What’s Important to the Customer
A product copywriter should be able to clearly define and understand your target audience. For the Nokia project, a key focus of the copywriting workshop was to get to grips with the target customer for the headphones. Each model had a distinct user in mind – someone using them for everyday use, the other in work settings – with clearly defined users, I could get a better idea of how the headphones fit into their lives and the pain points they experience. It was then much easier to draw out the benefits of the products and how they would provide value in the user’s life.
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